The inspiration behind this poem is actually the very first poem in this series but with a big picture of that moment. It's about the feeling that everyone wants to experience which is spending a time with someone you fancy and finding solace in little things like little conversations and watching a movie with them. This is the last poem in this series and it's not like i won't ever write poems with same theme its just that these poems are a part of a story. Now all that left to do is finish that story and the short film script. I hope someday i will get to do everything or these are going in flames with me.
Unspoken Affections: Part-X
our secret moments and i was high in that feeling
watching film on a reel with you but now all i can do is reeling
looking back at memories that were full of laughter
the night we had, i couldn't look away after,
so close yet i couldn't bring it up to you
i'm still in love when the lights went out
under the moonlight, it felt like a movie
and woke up to find your lips close to mine
in my fatal fantasies we're always together
but the next morning brought desertion in the light
What does this poem means to me?
This poem is about a feeling that i have never experienced before. It's based on a story that was in my mind, which i might or might not share her actually. Sorry but not any sooner. Anyways, if you ask me my favorite line in this poem is "in my fatal fantasies we're always together but the next morning brought desertion in the light" because the line itself brings you out from your delusions, your imaginations about a person that we all cook in our hand because it ain't gonna happen in reality so what's the point?
What are your thoughts?
I don't think you have never thought about experiencing it all because who doesn't but there's always a big side to our imaginations that is the desertion that will come to you even though you were never really "us" but it's still gonna hurt you as badly as if you were something to each other. what are your thoughts on this poem? let me know.
Fuck now way you wrote this
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