Astronomy: A Love I Could Never Have

This is the original version of my poem "Cosmic Longing: Un Amore Irragguiungible". I wrote this poem on May 20, 2024 and when i thought my message was not clear in this piece, i re-wrote an entire new poem. Even though the message is same, i treat this one poem as different. It speaks of the heartbreak the earlier one failed to speak. In other words, i should've just stick with this one. 

everyone is going to their place of dream

their pen and papers screams pride and dignity

and in the fate's script it only talks about my failure

my efforts led me to nowhere but my defeat

i'm envious of everyone who got to follow their dreams

i learnt about the stars, galaxies and cosmos

so one day i could steal a portion of their shine

to add in my name

learnt a language to study in a foreign land

but my dreams collapsed, i cried, i state